Critic of "The Cycle of the Sun and the Moon" by: Ryle Sarmiento

           The sun and moon is a married couple they live in the land of mandaya, the sun and moon always fight over little stuff, the moon always run because she was scared, but the sun always fails to catch her. One day the moon gave birth to a very bright and large star. That star looks like a man. One day the sun was very angry at his child. He chopped his child into small pieces and threw him in the sky. Another child was born and it was a gigantic crab. That gigantic crab is still living today that crab was very powerful. Sometmes the crab is living under deep seas and is causing us high tides. The crab was very quarrel some like the sun sometime the crab even want to eat his own mother, the moon We people are helping the moon not to get eaten by the crab. We shout at the crab and it will go away.
            This story is about the stars in the sky It also shows us that the attitude of the father is being passed down to his child.